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Protecting heaven's walls by ~outminder:iconoutminder:





When the world is crushing you
Like the pressure of the deep water blue
That surrounds you and engulfs you here
That’s when you need to be strong and live.

If all that they’ve taught me
Is that they’re not always there
To help you and guide you
Through the deepest despair

Then we all have to learn to keep on.

To keep on our guns
To keep on walking
To keep up with the run
Through the dark times of the sun

I can’t guide you from here.
It’s time you learnt to walk again
After too much time sitting down
Learn to stand up again

Remember those muscles we neglect
When we run through times that we’d rather forget
Time to smile
Time to laugh
Time to rid of regret

Maybe when you keep on
Maybe then they’ll go away
Leave us alone when they see
That they’ve not reduced us to crying on our knees

The bloody sweat is worth it in the end
When we’ve trudged on through hell and still we defend
The gates of our heaven from those who destroy
All things are good and decent in this world.

If this helps then say it, pass word around
We the suffering all stand our ground
When we feel alone and down and depressed
That is really when we can’t afford the rest

We need to stand up tall
Up against these walls
Take the pain in acid rain
And prevent heavens breach

When you fall stand up again
When you’re out of ammo beat them down
It’s not how many times we fall
But how many times we protect that wall

We stand alone here in the end
Yet still in our hands heaven depends
And although we can’t see the hope
It isn’t too far from the end of the rope

So tug at that rope
Pull them away
Take all the suffering
And throw it away

There’s always a better day
A better way
But we’ll never say
That we should do it a different way

This way is the only way
To make it through the dark day
Hold the sun in your memories
And we’ll see it again someday

Protect those gates with our suns in our minds

Heaven is safe for now…
©2005-2009 ~outminder
:iconoutminder:

Author's Comments

I dunno what actually happened here...

It doesn't make any sense now that I re read it but I read it anyway...

Keep on going and help others as you go...

It's all that we can do...

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:iconsuicidaldreamer:
i like how it is defending heaven. it more optomistic and yet it makes u wonder sort of how it turned out, lol. well now it would be good but maybe idk...lol. too many thoughts. but yea i like it. its strong and its like always keep ur ground. fight for whats right and what others use for their hope and strength. without that there would be nothing

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here lies the destiny...
of two hurt souls afraid to be...
cured again
that could be our epitaph
:iconsoulrain:
nice poem....gives me hope in a weird sort of way.
:iconoutminder:
why thaknyou... It didn't quite come out how i wanted it... it may get edited at a later date...

It's just basically... Don't rely on others cos they always let you down and fight for what you believe is right instead of the given right and wrong that everyon thinks...

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"just try and try until you reach the sky, even if its too high, you can't just sit here and sigh" my fwend Aszereth

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Touched by angels... my sister story account
:iconoutminder:
lol... as already stated it didn't quite get the full effect that it had in my head...

Chin up and see the star that burns for us all that some never see.
The hope that burns from out of the sky and into me...

There's hope... just keep on walking and you'll find it...

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"just try and try until you reach the sky, even if its too high, you can't just sit here and sigh" my fwend Aszereth

[link]
Touched by angels... my sister story account
:iconoki-oki:
It's beautiful. Call me a sop, but it gave me tears ^^

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Success is what happens when 10,000 hours of preparation meet with one moment of opportunity
:iconoutminder:
lol... you big sop... hehe...

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"just try and try until you reach the sky, even if its too high, you can't just sit here and sigh" my fwend Aszereth

[link]
Touched by angels... my sister story account
:iconoki-oki:
*cries*
^^

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Success is what happens when 10,000 hours of preparation meet with one moment of opportunity
:iconoutminder:
lol... i really didn't think this one was that good...

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"just try and try until you reach the sky, even if its too high, you can't just sit here and sigh" my fwend Aszereth

[link]
Touched by angels... my sister story account
:iconoki-oki:
Rare is an artist that approves of their own work. I thought it was great.

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Success is what happens when 10,000 hours of preparation meet with one moment of opportunity

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