Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 

the 28th wildflower by ~outminder:iconoutminder:



Such beauty has never been seen
As that which I set my eyes upon
And found in a field of grey
That little wild flower radiating resistance

What it was that made me find that flower
But it saved my life and made me think
That there may still be good to find in this world
Good that needs protecting

The dull greys had soaked into my skin
But that wild flower made me stop giving in
And colour flushed through my soul
And flooded out through my heart

Tears fall from the heavens as they salute the beauty
Of that small white flower held in my hand
The one that built me of wet sand
And helped me stand up again

Could it be?
What the flower whispers into my ear
Could it be that I’m more than ready for this
My time of hardships

Faith in myself inspired
Belief that I’m not as bad as you
Hope that maybe now I can pull through
All because of the 28th wildflower I had seen in that meadow…
©2006-2009 ~outminder
:iconoutminder:

Author's Comments

hehehehe...

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconplaceinthedirt:
oo this is a very encouraging poem... very well written also.. im loving it!

--
:skullbones: *Official Site :skullbones: *Forum :skullbones: *ModelMayhem :skullbones:

:flaguk:
:iconkumiko-1991:
OoOoo XD it sounds like SOMEBODY'S writing for a particular girrlll...XDDD :hug: its a really nice poem lol

--
HOLY HELL!
:iconoutminder:
why thankyou miss kel...

--
"just try and try until you reach the sky, even if its too high, you can't just sit here and sigh" my fwend Aszereth

[link]
Touched by angels... my sister story account
:iconoutminder:
thankyou... :blush: maybe...

--
"just try and try until you reach the sky, even if its too high, you can't just sit here and sigh" my fwend Aszereth

[link]
Touched by angels... my sister story account
:iconaszereth:
this is so cute and very touching! I love it!!!

eh-hem! hehehe...flower huh? who is it?? hehehe! c'mon tell me!!

I especially love this part :
What it was that made me find that flower
But it saved my life and made me think
That there may still be good to find in this world
Good that needs protecting

--
I faked my smiles
I tucked away my tears
Because not to be with you
Is greatest among my fears...

please visit ~aszereth's gallery!^__^
:iconoutminder:
sorry i'm lacking the antlers to be a deer... maybe a fox of some descripts...

--
"just try and try until you reach the sky, even if its too high, you can't just sit here and sigh" my fwend Aszereth

[link]
Touched by angels... my sister story account
:iconoutminder:
shush... not telling... :blush: you'll never get it out of me... If i were you i'd look at my favourtes.... more specifically the artists in my favourites... hint hint... you'll know it when you see it...

--
"just try and try until you reach the sky, even if its too high, you can't just sit here and sigh" my fwend Aszereth

[link]
Touched by angels... my sister story account
:iconoutminder:
oh and it's on the first page... hint hint hint...

--
"just try and try until you reach the sky, even if its too high, you can't just sit here and sigh" my fwend Aszereth

[link]
Touched by angels... my sister story account
:iconplaceinthedirt:
hehe... a deer is different to a dear.. but ya know.. if antlers get ya going.. :S

--
:skullbones: *Official Site :skullbones: *Forum :skullbones: *ModelMayhem :skullbones:

:flaguk:

Details

February 28, 2006
1.1 KB

Statistics

48
6 [who?]
189 (0 today)
1 (0 today)

Share

Link
Thumb

Site Map