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the final straw by ~outminder:iconoutminder:

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Six months with these feelings of not being accepted
Rivalled by eight years of loyalty and never ending friendship
I could never see as clearly as I did last night
Exactly what it was that I needed to do

This isn’t because of you and your failings
It is because of me and my failings in staying with you
Friends grow and move on through times like these
Now is your time to leave me behind on this path

I was never good enough for the friends that I stayed with
So clear now that it was all just a day dream
Thankyou for making it seem like it was ok
To hang around someone who I wasn’t worthy of

Thank you for the time that you spent with me
But now is your time of forgetting about me
Just like everyone does eventually
Don’t worry I’m fine and always will be.

The last straw
I decided
showed me the way
to get rid of this pain six months in my mind
So goodbye to you all
I wish you good luck
I hope you can accept this
Because,
Well because,
Because it is how it has to be…
©2006-2009 ~outminder
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=PlaceInTheDirt Mar 7, 2006, 5:43:32 AM
aww that made me feel sad... but also... it made me feel relief.. i dont know whether that's because of your words.. or because of my feelings when I don't have to be around people.

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~outminder Mar 7, 2006, 6:30:15 AM
yeah i see what you mean... thanks for the comment...

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"just try and try until you reach the sky, even if its too high, you can't just sit here and sigh" my fwend Aszereth

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~flight261 Mar 7, 2006, 9:27:29 AM
your not going to faid from my memory. you will always have some remenance.

i will stop and say hi if i see you in town :D

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IF YOUR NOT LIVING ON THE EDGE, YOU'RE TAKING UP TOO MUCH SPACE
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~flight261 Mar 7, 2006, 1:48:59 PM
leave you behind, no, you want to take a differnt path, which could end up back as now.

you are as worthy as the next man, worthy isnt a word in frindship.


i am not going to stop you, so go for it, take this opertunity and may our physical paths cross again.

but your keeping hold of me on da.

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IF YOUR NOT LIVING ON THE EDGE, YOU'RE TAKING UP TOO MUCH SPACE
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~outminder Mar 8, 2006, 1:00:07 AM
you can try...

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"just try and try until you reach the sky, even if its too high, you can't just sit here and sigh" my fwend Aszereth

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Touched by angels... my sister story account
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~outminder Mar 8, 2006, 4:37:51 AM
:glomp:

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"just try and try until you reach the sky, even if its too high, you can't just sit here and sigh" my fwend Aszereth

[link]
Touched by angels... my sister story account
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~outminder Mar 8, 2006, 4:59:32 AM
worthy is a word no matter what the relationship...

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"just try and try until you reach the sky, even if its too high, you can't just sit here and sigh" my fwend Aszereth

[link]
Touched by angels... my sister story account
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~outminder Mar 8, 2006, 4:59:53 AM
...

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"just try and try until you reach the sky, even if its too high, you can't just sit here and sigh" my fwend Aszereth

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Touched by angels... my sister story account
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